I don’t need fragile smoke whispers
slipping past my eyelashes
and hanging as beads of sweat at the hollow of my neck.
No, darling,
I have forgotten who I am.
I need the molten mocha of your eyes
to burn through the butterflies of doubt.
I need pupils dilated,
heavy breathing,
sounds-like-someone’s-breaking-me
kinda burning.
I need you close as ivy, grasping on the legs of my pale skinned veranda.
I am a foreigner in my own skin
and I don’t need your swaying, sultry song.
I need you to scream my name into the back of my throat.
Make me remember
who I am.
Make me.
© Laura A. Lord, 2018
Thank you to Mindlovemiserysmenagerie for your prompt 🙂
14 responses to “Make Me”
I need you close as ivy, grasping on the legs of my pale skinned veranda.
and that closing
Extraordinary work!
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Thank you, dear ❤
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whew this is fire! such talent: on the legs of my pale skinned veranda *snaps fingers*
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful and forceful.
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forceful…gritty!
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Thank you!
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This line takes my breath away (sorry for the cliche):
“I need you to scream my name into the back of my throat.”
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Thank you. ❤
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Yup, definitely feeling this!!! 🙂
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