I suppose He tore another page from The Book today. . .
let is slide between sweaty fingers,
slice the tip,
right there under the nail,
so the pain would ebb and flow,
waves of electricity with each
thump-thump –
a heartbeat set to leap into
break-neck pace,
as the blood dripped like heavy sealing wax.
Gifts unwrapped and
His will is a shiny, sparkling,
death trap.
It’s fully loaded and
set to go
right through the forehead
with the little blonde curl.
It’s His will,
His gift. . .
but your bullet.
You can join in this prompt at the Creativity Carnival, here.
6 responses to “Your Bullet”
I read it twice and am unable to utter another word again. Stunning thrilling breathtaking.
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Thank you. It stems from a news story this week that just broke my heart.
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Wow did not know that. but it sure felt heart breaking. Reading it again leaves me breathless all over again.
But…
Your last two lines did inspire me to write a story in combination with the picture.
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Yay! I can’t wait to read it.
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It is up and a long read.
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